I really think the 3rd one is the strongest. In the first, If you have all of the lines the same length and then "Dylan Thomas" breaking the frame, it seems to throw the composition off. As for the second one, I like the brackets but they seem heavy. The larger "Dylan Thomas" works here because of the brackets. But like I said, my preference is the third. It seems clean and simple. Bravo!
Ehhh...upon reviewing...Im digging the one with the brackets. Hmm. I will look at it tomorrow and I will tell you for sure, then. All of them look great though. Hows the Barcelona project coming?
My name is Dominic Wilson and I am a Graphic Design Student.
I am currently about to start my 3rd year at Northumbria University.
If I run out of breadcrumbs for the birds, I check my toaster.
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Ah soo proud!
I really think the 3rd one is the strongest. In the first, If you have all of the lines the same length and then "Dylan Thomas" breaking the frame, it seems to throw the composition off. As for the second one, I like the brackets but they seem heavy. The larger "Dylan Thomas" works here because of the brackets. But like I said, my preference is the third. It seems clean and simple. Bravo!
Ehhh...upon reviewing...Im digging the one with the brackets. Hmm. I will look at it tomorrow and I will tell you for sure, then. All of them look great though. Hows the Barcelona project coming?
Looking good!!
I've seen that bus stop before Wilson...
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